I think that I need to further explain myself in some areas. Shorten/elongate some paragraphs. I probably have some grammar errors, run-ons, etc. Sometimes I have trouble getting out the words I am trying to say/thinking if.
I think that my classmate will probably agree on some of the things that I think I need to work on. I might not have explained myself enough from someone else's perspective besides my own. Some questions I have are: what areas in my paper need work? Do I need to further explain myself in a certain part? Maybe take out or add something?
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